Wednesday, May 26, 2010

LC10 with Mrs T Year 5

Cross Country Reflection
At the beginning of term when we started Cross Country Training I felt nervous because I didn't know if I was good enough. Now Cross Country is finished, I feel proud because I think I did well. I represented Tui House in the Cross Country. We finished 2nd. My goal for Cross Country next year is to stay in the top 10 again.

Fishing Story


On Monday 3rd May the Minstrel came to Riverdale School. He taught us all about fishing. In class we wrote a story on a fishing experience. We are learning to be interesting writers by using lots of adjectives and details. We have learnt to get straight into the action.
I think my story is good because it has lots of details.
To improve my writing next time i will add more adjectives.